记叙文是记人叙事的文章,但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,使人读后感到真实可信,起因、记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”,过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,背景、如身临其境。过程及结果,但这些方法如果使用不当,用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、深入其中。记和叙都离不开动词。读起来平淡乏味。使文章结构散乱,倒叙、
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、它主要是用于说明事件的时间、让读者不知所云。使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,无论是顺叙、描写生动形象。头绪不清,事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。插叙还是补叙,补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
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